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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 10:35:46 GMT -6
Hey so this is not really a student request I guess, but I did not know where else to post this. I am a writer who likes to write short stories from time to time and I am writing a crime story about a young woman and the cop that is after her for a crime she committed. This woman is very beautiful, in her early 20s, but she is a gold digger. She seduces men and then uses them. Well this one time she seduced this older man in his late 60s, got him to sign over his money to her in the event of his death, and during a passionate night she drugged him and smothered him but instead of using a pillow she sat on his face with her own butt. Well, the officer ends up catching up with her and she is arrested and there is a trial and all of this. Just out of curiosity and for accuracy sake, what are the chances she'd get the death penalty?
Also, how many here would be in favor of her getting the death penalty? Your opinions will decide what happens in my story. If you participate, thanks. If not, thanks as well, lol.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 18, 2014 12:37:03 GMT -6
She is a murderer.. Plain and simple. Execute the bytch.
You added the the beauty , youth, and sex to make it okay. Well it's not. She is a manipulative, lying, con artist murdering POS. End of your story. Nothing to see here. Move along, Move along.
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 18, 2014 13:19:02 GMT -6
Reminds me of Karla Faye Tucker again, young, pretty & yes sex was part of that crime too. Karla took sexual pleasure while slamming & ripping apart the two victims with an axe with great pleasure. In her story she needs to add in the psycho found God.
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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 18:53:57 GMT -6
Okay, first off you people need to quit acting like they are hot. Karla Faye Tucker? Nothing pretty about her. I'm talking Hollywood femme fatale. Gorgeous woman. Could have been a model if she didn't become a gold digger. This is a crime/detective thriller and I wanted to know what you think should be done with the character. How many votes for death penalty?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 18, 2014 19:19:06 GMT -6
I DO NOT think Karla Faye Tucker was hot . I just took it that when you posted in gender and execution, what if the woman was beautiful and remorseful? There were so many that thought that KFT was so good looking and so remorseful. I didn't say that she was but plenty of the unbiased media did.
I vote for the death penalty of your slanted story. I have explained why to you in another thread. Get over yourself.
Btw, what do you know about forensics? I think I might like to read your short story so that I could laugh my a$$ off.
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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 19:21:31 GMT -6
Nothing, so maybe you could help me? It's not slanted. She's going to get the DP. Do you want to help me? If you know a lot about the dp process, the trial, etc, could you help me out so I can get it accurate?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 18, 2014 19:32:22 GMT -6
NO I WILL NOT HELP YOU...
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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 19:33:18 GMT -6
What did I do to you sir? lol.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 18, 2014 19:39:01 GMT -6
My name is greggsmom. WTF do you think a sir would be a mom???
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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 19:40:45 GMT -6
Sorry. My mistake ma'am. I really would appreciate help though.
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 18, 2014 19:43:10 GMT -6
What did I do to you sir? lol. You did not post this afternoon gone for 7 hrs, now your back I see.
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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 19:47:39 GMT -6
Whitediamonds will you help me?
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 18, 2014 19:50:29 GMT -6
Whitediamonds will you help me? Help with what?
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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 19:53:36 GMT -6
Help writing my story?
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 18, 2014 20:03:41 GMT -6
Oh please, great story a sexy, young,pretty women sits on an ole mans face to suffocate him, she has remorse for being caught. She is not mental, she is gulty, she has good veins obviousy, so used the last resort appeal , only thing left was to claim she found God. Well, have God show up in court then I believe he will say" send this fake to me. I'll foward her on from here to where she should be. Executed !!!
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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 20:10:26 GMT -6
No I meant can we chat about it somewhere else? Procedure and that stuff?
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 18, 2014 20:18:48 GMT -6
No I meant can we chat about it somewhere else? Procedure and that stuff? No thanks, that information is on the internet. How can you write a story without finding your facts yourself on procedure? To add: your on the internet all day...
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Post by brittney on Jul 18, 2014 21:58:46 GMT -6
I'm on the internet all day? Really? Are you NSA? lol
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Post by brittney on Jul 19, 2014 9:33:41 GMT -6
She is a murderer.. Plain and simple. Execute the bytch. You added the the beauty , youth, and sex to make it okay. Well it's not. She is a manipulative, lying, con artist murdering POS. End of your story. Nothing to see here. Move along, Move along. What if she asked for mercy?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 19, 2014 10:41:38 GMT -6
She is a murderer.. Plain and simple. Execute the bytch. You added the the beauty , youth, and sex to make it okay. Well it's not. She is a manipulative, lying, con artist murdering POS. End of your story. Nothing to see here. Move along, Move along. What if she asked for mercy? The same mercy she showed her victim??? Pretty simple she showed no mercy, she receives no mercy. End of your short story that is being written for you own entertainment. Fictional story, fictional mercy.
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 19, 2014 11:55:16 GMT -6
[quote source="/post/623563/thread" timestamp="1405708623" author=. What if she asked for mercy?[/quote] Our laws do include mercy, reason so many murder's do not recieve even LWOP or execution. Too many who are released or while incarcerated murder again. Do they deserve mercy again?
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Post by brittney on Jul 19, 2014 15:41:57 GMT -6
What if she asked for mercy? The same mercy she showed her victim??? Pretty simple she showed no mercy, she receives no mercy. End of your short story that is being written for you own entertainment. Fictional story, fictional mercy. What if she got on her knees, crying, begging for mercy?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 19, 2014 16:19:30 GMT -6
The same mercy she showed her victim??? Pretty simple she showed no mercy, she receives no mercy. End of your short story that is being written for you own entertainment. Fictional story, fictional mercy. What if she got on her knees, crying, begging for mercy? You are asking if I would show mercy for a beautiful, young, sexy woman that is on her knees, crying begging, who killed with her butt? Is that you Matthew???
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 19, 2014 17:24:22 GMT -6
The same mercy she showed her victim??? Pretty simple she showed no mercy, she receives no mercy. End of your short story that is being written for you own entertainment. Fictional story, fictional mercy. What if she got on her knees, crying, begging for mercy? Yeah, most cowards do that when it is their "butt" being sat on.
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 19, 2014 17:35:57 GMT -6
The same mercy she showed her victim??? Pretty simple she showed no mercy, she receives no mercy. End of your short story that is being written for you own entertainment. Fictional story, fictional mercy. What if she got on her knees, crying, begging for mercy? Are you trying to twist this? To show having a DP we are bloodthirsty murderers like murderes "again".... Cute twist.
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 19, 2014 17:40:31 GMT -6
[quote source="/post/623563/thread" timestamp="1405708623" author=. What if she asked for mercy? Our laws do include mercy, reason so many murder's do not recieve even LWOP or execution. Too many who are released or while incarcerated murder again. Do they deserve mercy again?[/quote] I noticed you by passed my question to you, how many times does a killer deserve mercy?
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Post by brittney on Jul 19, 2014 20:00:22 GMT -6
Depends on what they did and how they reacted to it. They deserve a serious punishment, that's for sure. I think there are circumstances where mercy can be shown.
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Post by brittney on Jul 20, 2014 12:36:26 GMT -6
What if she got on her knees, crying, begging for mercy? You are asking if I would show mercy for a beautiful, young, sexy woman that is on her knees, crying begging, who killed with her butt? Is that you Matthew??? ? Anyways...well? lol Would you?
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Post by whitediamonds on Jul 20, 2014 12:55:39 GMT -6
You are asking if I would show mercy for a beautiful, young, sexy woman that is on her knees, crying begging, who killed with her butt? Is that you Matthew??? ? Anyways...well? lol Would you?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 20, 2014 13:11:08 GMT -6
You are asking if I would show mercy for a beautiful, young, sexy woman that is on her knees, crying begging, who killed with her butt? Is that you Matthew??? ? Anyways...well? lol Would you? MMMM let me see. Would I have fictional mercy for a fictional beautiful, young, sexy woman who murders with her butt? No I wouldn't. I guess you could come back with BUTT BUTT BUTT
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